Sunday, 19 October 2008

Yr 7: Readathon


Hello all Readathon sponsees. Hopefully you're almost ready to get reading over half-term: Reading material selected; sponsors building up. This week the library is open at lunch time only to you. We have a selection of teachers and other members of staff organised to read part of their favourite book to you as well a someone coming in on Tuesday to read to you in Cornish. Who knows what else we'll get up to?

Sunday, 12 October 2008

7L: Work Poems


Hello 7L. I would like to send off our work poems by Thursday at the lastest so if you took your poem home to finish, you need to make sure you get then back in to me.


Thanks


Miss C.

Tuesday, 7 October 2008

National Poetry Day

Did you know that Thursday 9th October is National Poetry Day?
What is your favourite poem or song?

One of mine is:

Sonnet 130

My mistress's eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lip's red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun,
If hair be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damasked, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
In some perfumes there is more delight
Than the breath with which my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know,
Music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground.
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.

By William Shakespeare. (As if you couldn't have guessed)

Yr 11: Curley's Wife


You all came up with some really strong points in today's debate about Curley's Wife. I was impressed (as always) by your reasoning and use of evidence- it was not easy to decide who had the strongest argument. Also, you worked very effectively in large groups- not always easy!

I'd love to know your individual opinions though- Do you think Curley's Wife deserves our sympathy? Why or why not?

Year 7: Readathon


Right, I've already given out about 30 sponsorship forms and that only covers 3 tutor groups so far, so I'm really impressed by your enthusiasm. Those of you that are taking part, here's what you need to do now.


1. Make sure you show your Parents/Carers the letter so they know what you are doing.

2. You need to decide what you are going to read and fill in the top part of the sponsorship form. Remember, it doesn't matter what you read, just that you set yourself a bit of a challenge. You can read books, magazines, newspapers, listen to books on tape, have stories read to you... anything as long as it is a bit more than you might normally read.

3. Once you have set yourself the challenge you need to collect some sponsors. It is really important that you only ask friends and family members- your safety is the most important thing. You have until half term to collect as many as possible.

4. You've picked your books; got the sponsors now over half term, all you have to do is the reading itself.

5. Finally- you need to collect the money from your sponsors and hand in to either Miss Edwards (in the library) or me (Miss Cutts, room 58)


With 8 year 7 tutor groups taking part, I have high hopes that we can raise a really good amount for the Readathon. There will be a prize for the tutor group that raises the most AND the individual that raises the most.


But more importantly- enjoy the books, stories and texts that you read.


Thanks for your help year 7.


If you would like to know more about the charities you are raising money for click on the links below.

7L: research homework


Wow! some of you are so quick. Whoever Mini Champy is- I have your facts, well done.
Thought I better create a blog that you could attach your homework to. Remember, you had to find out three things (minimum) about one of the following:
1. Archaeopteryx,
2. Owl pellets,
3. Icarus,
4. Persephone,
5. Angels
6. Evolution

Keep up the good work!

Monday, 6 October 2008

Year 10: The Shakespeare Essay


Here it is, the moment you've all been waiting for: your first piece of coursework


Essay Title: How does Shakespeare Make Act 3, Scene 1 of ‘Romeo and Juliet’ Dramatically effective?



1. Introduction: give a brief summary of what the play is about. How does it fit Into the Tragedy genre? What themes does it explore? What is the social and historical context of the play? Why is the play still relevant to a modern audience? Where does the scene fit into the play?

2. How does Shakespeare create mood and atmosphere at the start of the scene? (Think about Mercutio and Benvolio’s conversation. What are they discussing? What kind of image is Mercutio going on and on about?

3. How does this scene contrast with the previous scene? (the wedding scene) How does the mood change?

4. How does this scene link with previous events events in the play? (the ongoing feud, the previous public brawls, the Prince’s warning)

5. How does Shakespeare use Dramatic Irony (when the audience knows something the characters don’t) in this scene?

6. How does Shakespeare Use the features of stagecraft? (entrances and exits, stage directions)?
7. How does Shakespeare’s use of Verse and Prose add to the drama? (the scene starts in prose and ends with Rhyming couplets)

8. How does the build up of events create drama and suspense? (for example the repetition of ‘A Plague on both your houses’)

9. Conclusion: Finally, why is this such an important scene? How would the audience feel at this point? Why could this scene be considered a turning point? What do you think of the play and this scene?

TIPS FOR SUCCESS
1. I have shown I know the order of the play and its characters.
2. I have clearly answered the question in the title of the essay (I have used the sentences starters to help me with this)
3. I have used short quotes to support my ideas (PEE paragraphs)
4. I have talked about the play (the script) and not the film.

Topic sentence starters:
At the start of Act 3 scene 1…
One of the ways Shakespeare makes this scene dramatically effective is by…
Act 3 scene 1 is made dramatically effective in various ways such as…
Shakespeare uses … this makes the scene more dramatic because…
Shakespeare creates effective drama by…

Sentence starters: (use these to develop your ideas in your paragraphs and ensure you’re still focused on the question. )
The drama is built up again when…
The effect of the tension is that…
Shakespeare makes this dramatic by…
This is effective because the audience…
The reason this is dramatic is because…
Shakespeare refers to… the effect of this is…
Shakespeare reveals… this is made dramatic because…
In conclusion, Act 3 scene 1 is very dramatic because…

Good Luck!